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== Role: Critic ==

=== Criticism ===

Any Critic may critique the plant as a role-specific action.

Any Critic may critique the plant or a player's action that was done that day as a role-specific action.

If the plant has been critiqued at least once previously during a day it attempts to grow, then for that roll attempt:

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*Add 2 entries of "The plant becomes eligible for a development roll today."

*If the plant had not been also admired at least once previously during that day, instead add 1 entry of "Nothing Happens."

If a watering action is critiqued, the plant that was watered can attempt to grow again on the second time the plant is watered that day, but only if the second watering comes after the critique, and from the player who did the critiqued action.

If an admire action is critiqued, the second time the plant is admired, double the number of entries added via the admiration for that plant, but only if the second admiration happens after the critique and from the player who did the critiqued action.

If a caretaker action is critiqued, the player of that action will learn from the inefficiency, and will not become fatigued on their first action the next day, unless they fall off the plant.

After a Critic has performed their third critique in a day, additional critiques from that player on that day have no effect. These additional critiques can not be taken seriously.

== Role: Gardener ==

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 == Role: Critic ==
 === Criticism ===
-Any Critic may critique the plant as a role-specific action.
+Any Critic may critique the plant or a player's action that was done that day as a role-specific action.
 If the plant has been critiqued at least once previously during a day it attempts to grow, then for that roll attempt:
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 *Add 2 entries of "The plant becomes eligible for a development roll today."
 *If the plant had not been also admired at least once previously during that day, instead add 1 entry of "Nothing Happens."
+If a watering action is critiqued, the plant that was watered can attempt to grow again on the second time the plant is watered that day, but only if the second watering comes after the critique, and from the player who did the critiqued action.
+If an admire action is critiqued, the second time the plant is admired, double the number of entries added via the admiration for that plant, but only if the second admiration happens after the critique and from the player who did the critiqued action.
+If a caretaker action is critiqued, the player of that action will learn from the inefficiency, and will not become fatigued on their first action the next day, unless they fall off the plant.
+After a Critic has performed their third critique in a day, additional critiques from that player on that day have no effect. These additional critiques can not be taken seriously.
 == Role: Gardener ==